Poem: Un/documented, Kentucky Summary

“demographics unit”

Pg. 3, line 46, written: no my wife was a permanent

Change to: nomi wi was permiso

Pg 4, line 10, written: & buy many things . . . if law requires

Change to: & buy mushos things . . . if law quiera

“get home & you just want”

5, line 5, written: giving illegal immigrants the privilege to grab legally

change to: giving the globe the illegal privilege to grab

5, line 11, written: another point abt. beaners

change to: another point specifically abt. beaners

5, line 18, written: & when illegals try to get licensed

change to: & when they try to get licensed

“boots on the ground”

4, line 4:33, written: 4:33raising many nirvana’s I

change to: 4:33raising many nirvanas I

8, line 7:15, written: 7:15& I know where the illegals eat—where they sell their labor

change to: 7:15& I know where they eat—& where they sell their worth

pg 8, line 8:21, written: 8:21illegal drunk driver w. no lights & no

change to: 8:21drunk driver w. no lights & no

9, line 10:49, written 10:49, written: 10:49does not scare you—they I had a blast

change to: had a blast

9, line 11:16, written: 11:16At Contestame jobs in Shelbyville—we don’t have

change to: 11:16at Contestame jobs in Shelbyville—we don’t have

10, line 13:24, written: 13:24warned you abt. their—

change to: 13:24 warn you abt. their—

“Appalachicanos . . . brownly”

12, line 6, written: to illegal aliens I—

change to: to . . . I

12, line 10, written: nearly 300 percent increase in illegals—

change to: nearly 300 percent increase—

“tide risen”

13, lines 12-13, written

professional federal government c

ompletely abdicated its

change to:

professional federal government

completely abdicated its

13, line 25, written: & i know—i

change to: & I know—I

“migra chingada”

15, lines 11-12, written

to illegal aliens yesterday & today—

hundreds of illegal aliens have got to this search—

change to:

yesterday & today—

hundreds have passed on this search—

15, line 33, written: okay—my spleen—red white & blue—good somebody from the preaching . . . he either . . .

change to: my spleen—red white & blue—good from the preaching . . . either . . .

“leviathan spear”

17, line 16, written: be four you begin to deal with this fear because it’ll be very

change to: before you begin to deal with this fear bc. it’ll be

17, line 18, written: we know that someone’s alive can . . .

change to: we know that someone’s alive & can . . .

 

 

 

 

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